wen i knew u misunderstood.
u left me fr such silly reasonnd dats wen i understood d lesson.
wen i walked along the street
i cud hear ma heart beat
each beat had ur name
wished ur heart wud hav dne d same,stil i wish u to b near
hugging me rite here
saying"baby i love ya more"
wen i noe dats nt gona hapen anymore
stil i hope
stil i dream
Of we being together..
y? every1ask
wen its nt a simple task.
i cnt wipe u from my meomories
wen u left me with mysteries
al i have to say is dat
i am stil yours.
My First Post ..:)
ReplyDeleteur first one n i like it .. somethin comin deep dwn frm ur heart :). gud luck wid ur blog sweethrt ;-)
ReplyDeletegud one for a begn.. but din actly lik de theme.. u noe. ahem.. but stil.. nice to noe dat u do dis well enough for some claps.. get betta n betta..
ReplyDelete@nadeda...danks fr dt
ReplyDelete@mohit.... even i nevr wntd dis to b d theme for ma first post...bt smwhw landed it thr ..
woman! start writing poems abt 'YOURSELF'! :x
ReplyDeleteotherwise....nice work da...happy blogging :)
thats a good thought which people think in rare.i appreciate it
ReplyDeletetat was smthin cool which nids appreciation..! i dnt knw wat made u write that poem bt tose lines gt sme pain in it..
ReplyDeletereally nice work..! :)
it made me think for awhile abt the theme though..! ehehe... !
danks apparna
ReplyDeletesounds very much like a Backstreet Boys or Boyzone lyric !! but,i guess when one is down there,one always keeps it simple.eh?
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ReplyDeleteAnuroop is right. Write your heart out and it comes really nice and fine...!!!
ReplyDeletehmmmm pretty interesting.. maybe u myt hav been thru ol dat.. very original n rich... i think u shud start writing songs 4 my band...;)..
ReplyDeletethanks anuroop nd ranjith ...
ReplyDeletegreat wrk bhavana.......u shud write more we need more
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